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Leave her alone
Her sun is lost
In the outer space
Where the dark fell.
Try to look away
Forget the door
What cries beyond
Does not love you.
Your time ran out
The skies are falling
Over a dumb head
Yours.
And it’s gonna be
The last agony
She had hopes
That you destroyed
For fun.
Can you see
That she is broken
Buried in disorder?
You punched her
Like a beast.
Don’t try to mend it
With beautiful flowers
She doesn’t want you
Breathing.
You need a soul
To get her right
When you broke her
Did you feel mercy?
Now you are hated
Where a heart beats
Supermassive black holes
Spreads fear.
And it’s gonna be
Your last memory
Inside a cave
The only thought
Comes from the rage.
(10/9/14)
Her sun is lost
In the outer space
Where the dark fell.
Try to look away
Forget the door
What cries beyond
Does not love you.
Your time ran out
The skies are falling
Over a dumb head
Yours.
And it’s gonna be
The last agony
She had hopes
That you destroyed
For fun.
Can you see
That she is broken
Buried in disorder?
You punched her
Like a beast.
Don’t try to mend it
With beautiful flowers
She doesn’t want you
Breathing.
You need a soul
To get her right
When you broke her
Did you feel mercy?
Now you are hated
Where a heart beats
Supermassive black holes
Spreads fear.
And it’s gonna be
Your last memory
Inside a cave
The only thought
Comes from the rage.
(10/9/14)
About a man who beat his wife, the woman escapes and takes refuge in the home of a friend. The man wants her back, and holds a bouquet of roses for her looking for forgiveness, but he is not allowed to see his wife. The first two stanzas were born from a spontaneous moment that went to a completely different thing.
© 2014 - 2024 St-Rhye
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Good piece overall. Though, the story line seems a little hard to follow to the reader; but, I can tell it has your raw emotions behind it. Most sentences seem to flow and have perfect placement. Nice job! c: